More Than Words: Web Text as Experience and Design
by perryJanuary 5th, 2007
This joke says it all: The theory that a million monkeys typing for a million years could reproduce the works of Shakespeare has been disproven by the internet.
Good writing doesn’t happen by chance. And clever web text takes even more planning. With limited space and dwindling attention spans, how can mere words captivate your audience amidst all those striking graphics and kinetic flash?
They don’t have to. Instead, they should integrate seamlessly into your site. Today, websites are less about information and more about experience. Good websites are a blast to visit. And the great ones are designed so well, with everything meshing so perfectly, that when you leave you sit back in your chair, light a cigarette, and say Gawd, that was good.
Writing is one important part of that experience. And it’s often overlooked when creating that web experience. Good writers look at their words as another design element. I once worked for a multimedia company that designed the website for Saturn. Not the planet, but the auto company. Saturn exudes a sense of community, and they wanted their website to reflect it. Words were a crucial part of their earthy, “We Are Family” web experience.
Words paint pictures. Think not? Let’s do a little test. Say you’re a web developer trying to sell yourself. Read the following sentence and tell me what you think: “Our web services are top-notch, our employees really care about their work, and we’ll create a great website for you.” Petty boring. Now this: “Our inventive designers customize glittering websites for your target market with a fresh understanding of marketing niches that apply creative, winning solutions.” Which company do you hire?
Creating great web text is actually simple: be brief, add pizzazz, and know your audience.
Rule #1: Be Brief
We’ve all visited websites so overwhelmed by text that we face a sea of alphabetical mumbo-jumbo. Yuck. The experience is ruined the moment the page loads.
Be brief. Be pithy. Most of all, don’t be tiresome or dull. If visitors want more information, link to another page and keep that brief. Typically, 250-300 words per page is enough to say what you want, especially for company information or employee bios. Less is definitely more. If you can’t shorten your web text… find a someone who can.
Rule #2: Add Pizazz
Words are more fun than Silly Putty. They cajole, persuade, entice, and flatter. The right words can stop a war or start a romance. Try writing a love letter without them.
Your website text should have the same style and flair as a love letter. Hire a professional. And I don’t mean a shrink, although some psychologists can really write. The spicy phrase, the lilting sentence, or the sizzling metaphor incite your virtual visitors to action.
And don’t forget humor. Laughter makes everything go down smoother. How do you think we got comedy traffic schools? It’s certainly not because cops have a sense of humor.
Charm, dazzle, and humor your visitors with words that soar off the screen.
Rule #3: Know Your Audience.
This rule could also be “Know your experience.” Are you trying to create bouncy, lively interactions for curious kids? A dizzying array of sights and sounds for hyperactive teens? Or a steady, calming experience for community-minded car buyers? Whatever the design, your words should enhance and embellish the moment. Your writer should be involved in the planning process to take full advantage of your site’s gorgeously integrated design.
By focusing on text as an essential part of your blissfully integrated website, you create a completely immersive experience for your visitors. They’ll be happily amused, engaged, and fulfilled … and so will your bottom line.






